Thursday, February 2, 2012

The Pain You Caused

The Pain You Caused
By: Asia L. Livingston
Yesterday was the past,
Today is the future
Why cant you just drop the past
Relationships just won’t last
Don’t know why I give my trust.
Give my love.
Give everything.
Why do I keep trying to,
Work everything out with you
You always acting like a fool
I’m tired of trying to tell the truth
Don’t know why I keep up with you
Why do I,
Keep making the same mistakes as before,
Knowing that I can’t trust you no more
I’m getting sick and tired of your lies
Closing my eye’s before I start to cry
You are the one to cause all this pain
My heart is suffering, you’re the one to blame
Wanting to leave, but can’t walk out the door
I can’t go on like this anymore. . .
This song/ poem is referring to the story i wrote about how i met my dad, because if you read very closely in the beginning i said, “My life started was like a blessing from God, but then turned into a living nightmare,” well this is the living nightmare of my  life.
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13 comments:

  1. 16brownmFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:40 AM

    that was a good song and your a good singer

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  2. DariusFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    ASIA ! YOU GO GIRL ! LOL I LIKED IT

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  3. Evan AFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    that was an alsome song

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  4. 16porejFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    I love your song and your dedication of it.I love it

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  5. steve8071February 2, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    Wow....you've got some serious guts to not only just put this down on paper, but sing it in front of the class (you nailed it, by the way). I am totally jealous, in awe. awesome.

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  6. Karlee H.February 2, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    That was beast mode! You can sang girl.

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  7. 16goettmFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:43 AM

    dude that was totaly from the heart and the was beast mode!

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  8. caseyFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    It is a very sad song.

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  9. 16delgadFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:48 AM

    that was amazingly awesome. I liked that it was a song that you sang great

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  10. LizFebruary 2, 2012 at 5:59 AM

    I thought that your song was really deep. It showed raw emotion and actual feeling. I've never read anything like that before.

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  11. kk:)ily katlyn nicoleFebruary 2, 2012 at 7:09 AM

    AWESOME!!!

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  12. TamariFebruary 2, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    this was deep! i heard you sing! nice vocals! are you in chorus? if not, you should be!

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  13. Karlee H.February 6, 2012 at 4:50 AM

    I liked this so much that I had to read it again and I tried to sing it in my mind but it didnt work out to well. My favorite part is when you say "I cant walk out the door."

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