Having one of those days...
Again.
I don’t know why,
But I am.
I don’t want to eat,
I don’t want to talk,
I don’t want to stand,
I don’t want to sit.
I just want to
Lay down.
Shut up.
And cry.
Just lay
And let the days go by.
Cause I feel unwanted,
Not needed
Like the world is against me.
Like I’m falling.
Falling into a pit of
Hate and hell.
Just falling into
A deep.
Dark.
Sleep.
…..
Unwanted you want.
Unwanted.
I’ll.
Be.
wow alsome girl
ReplyDeletethat was a depressing poem but still good
ReplyDeleteGood poetry is meant to be read aloud, and reading this aloud made it! Thanks for sharing this with the class.
ReplyDeleteYour voice makes your poem sound better than just normal.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem it was very emotional
ReplyDeleteThat was so deep!
ReplyDeleteGREAT POEM I love the way you said it like your voice was perferct for it
ReplyDeletethis was really cool and nice writing
ReplyDeletewoll first off you did great. Second I know how you feel. Great peom and plus you are never unwanted .
ReplyDeleteI love the poem I had those days before
ReplyDeleteI don't want to say it was just good. In fact, it was SPECACTULAR, AMAZING, and just what I needed to feel whole again. It may be the words, or the way I know you, but this is deep, and I really love you for it.
ReplyDeleteI Love This Poem . <3 It brings back Memories .[':
ReplyDeleteok this is so good you sing really well!
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